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Our story... Chapter 1
The night was cold, and merciless. The cold wind blew hard on her face and chest, and fighting to keep her eyes focused on the uneven ground was imposible. The heavy rain made sight even more impossible.

Far in the distance she could see it. Barely. The outline of a cottage, just a few more steps away. She tried her best to trod on, but her head was beginning to spin. She had not eaten for almost three days now. She would have not made it this far if not for the wild mushrooms she found by the river. The river must have been taken over by now.

The cottage was getting closer now. She was almost there. Then, as was about to reach out her hand and touch the silvery knob, everything went black.

'Bee? Bee..?! She's.... she's awake!'

Her eyes inched open, slowly. Something about them was hurting so much. Her head hurt like hell. Her sight was ablur at first, all she could see were the shades of two figures in front of her.

The door swung open, and someone rushed in. He was clad in a green uniform, the crest of an angel near the breast pocket. He ran towards the girl, and sat her up, before offering her a cup of water, which she push away. He looked her in the face.

'Miss Bee.. can you hear me? You're ok now... You're...' before the man could finish, she grabbed his arm.

'Wh.. whe.. where... is he? Where...' before she could finish, her world went pitch black again.

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The room was no longer its usual self. The grand piano that once stood in the middle of the room was covered by ash and dust by now. He walked slow and carefully, careful not the pressure the already weakened old wooden floorings below him. He look up towards the left wall, and the label D209 - Lecture Hall looked back at him. Sighing, he reached out and brushed away the dust accumulated over the years.

Then, there was a knock on the door.

'Sir?'

He turned towards the guest. The officer saluted, his face the expression of grimace. This made him sigh.

'Have you found her?'

The officer shook his head.

'We're trying our best, sir, but the strom is just too wild and...'

He held up his hand to stop him.

'No.. I don't want any excuses!! Get more men out there and do not get back here until you find her!'

'But sir, the rain is just too heavy, and we cant risk getting.....'

'I SAID GET OUT THERE!!!'

The officer saluted, and raced out of the room.

He sank back into his chair, closed his eyes and rested his head on his clutched fist. Slowly he opened them, and a photo frame of a beautiful young girl appeared on top of the desk, next to the golden printed words 'GENERAL T.Y.Hong'

He closed his eyes in prayer, 'Please be ok.... please...' and tears began to roll down his cheeks.

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UTAR - the year 2028. The existing government of teachers and tutors were overthrown by a rebelious SRC election team. The President, known as Cheng, overturned the existing government with his army and claimed total control over the UTAR administration. The former president, T.Weilee, retreated to a river side village known as Boh-Ping, and set camp there. Under his control, Cheng began to undergo tremendous change and ruled with an iron fist. He implemented crazy school fees, high taxes on library cards, and students even had to pay for toilet fees! He even abolished the ballot system and forced all cars that entered UTAR to be confiscated. The students of UTAR, angered by the new rules, formed a protest in from of the DSA, and demanded things to be set right. It was a bloody day, as the leader of the protestors, the 70-year old Proffessor Allan N. was shot by the security guards with M16s. Another 16 died, and 79 wounded. Cheng thought this would keep the students quiet, but little did he know that a rebellion began to form. They called themselves... the First Elite Troops G-1, or FETG-1. The leader of G-1, General Y.Hong, declared war on the government and attacked the cafeteria by stealing Cheng's soldiers Vitagen supply. Angry because thier Vitagen got stolen, the angered Cheng commanded a massively huge walao-eh fleet of 500 people and destroyed General Hong's base in Block C. Now, a triangular war begins to form between the Cheng dynasty, FETG-1 and President T.WeiLee.

This is the story of friendship, power, love, and total control. A fictional story about FETG-1 characters. ^^
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2 Responses
  1. siewli Says:

    nt bad use all of us as the character in the story, i'm waiting for my part...
    the story is nt bad tooo..
    waiting the following chapter...


  2. ~VanRyuzuki~ Says:

    thx.... actualy writing cuz feel like doing sumthing crazy. but running low on ideas. next one coming soon. ^^


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